This week we read James Berlin’s Contemporary Composition. He discusses four theories of writing
pedagogy: Neo-Aristotelians/Classicists, Positivists/Current-Traditionalists,
Neo-Platonists/ Expressionists, and New Rhetoricians (Berlin’s preferred). I identify most strongly with the pedagogy of New Rhetoricians like Kenneth Burke and Andrea Lunsford. Berlin describes that within this theory meaning is formed between the interaction of the writer, reality, and the reader. Truth, then, is not pre-existing but “dynamic and dialectical.” We’ve
also been discussing product- versus process-focused writing. Students seem so
focused on their writing product, represented by a grade. My evolving teaching
philosophy would emphasize the value in the writing process and seek to engage
students’ internal motivations.
Considering these values, my First Year Composition syllabus
would include assignments that highlight the writing process, like brainstorms,
outlines, multiple revisions/drafts, and peer critiques. These assignments
would likely culminate into a rhetorical analysis that would allow students to
see how they can create meaning within their own writing. Working thesis
statements would be emphasized at each draft and discussed in class. I would guide
class discussions around defining audience, context, and purpose as well as
understanding rhetorical appeals.
And while I’m mentioning class discussion – this would be an
assignment in itself. I don’t expect FYC students to be able to speak eloquently
about the complexity of rhetorical appeals, but I would hope to create a
classroom environment that encourages the sharing of all ideas. The success of
my hypothetical course would rely heavily on these class discussions: I’d
rather assess students’ understanding of the given topic in this informal
setting before assigning grades to final drafts that speak to a level of
misunderstanding (a failure on my part).
Based almost wholly on my experience grading BA1 (the first
assignment, a brief rhetorical analysis) last week, I would not assign grades
for their first attempted rhetorical analysis (which would either be a small
in-class assignment or the first draft of their rhetorical analysis). I would
reluctantly assign grades to other assignments as a necessary means of
assessment.
I’ve stated I would try to engage students’ internal
motivations. To do so, I would encourage students to pick their own topics for
their rhetorical analysis – a bit more work on my part, but worth the higher
potential for motivated writers. At every opportunity, I would give students a
chance to guide discussion. Although in-class assignments would have to be
identical for the sake of time, other assignments would have multiple options
when possible so students have the opportunity to choose the topic most
interesting to them.
Lastly, I would find a way to engage my students with
technology. I’ve really enjoyed assignments in the past that incorporated a
weekly digital component, such as writing a personal blog or linking in
relevant articles to a shared blog. Perhaps I could narrowly prompt students
for the first few weeks – “Post to the class blog about XYZ” – and then give
them more freedom as they begin to understand my expectations for the weekly
assignment. For example, students might post a recent article and briefly
discuss the author’s audience, context, and purpose. This weekly practice would
allow students to share ideas and facilitate discussion beyond the classroom.
Giving students blogs for a class? What kind of assignment is that?
ReplyDeleteAll comedy aside, your thoughts on being reluctant to grade papers assesses a good point. Grades don't really do anything to engage a student's internal motivation. An A only boosts a student's ego, without giving that student something to at least learn from. What's more, students forget about grades and don't really remember the material for that long. So it is a struggle of sorts to get students to actually retain the information, and putting that retaining of information above a student's grade in the final draft helps in some way to give that student a better concept of how to do critical writing. Overall, you did a good job here with your ideas on engaging your supposed students in terms of assignments without putting grades first
Thanks! Speaking of motivations, I didn't intend to imply that grades are not a motivating factor, but rather that they are an external motivating factor (versus an internal one). Since I'd like to engage my students to consider process (internal) over product (external), I'd like to also consider internal motivators.
DeleteWhile I really like the idea of letting students choose their own topics for rhetorical analyses, or really any assignment, my only concern would be what would happen when they face a situation where they are given a specific topic and cannot alter it in any way? I think personal writing, or writing on your own chosen topic is an excellent place to start. You're absolutely right in that it will help motivate students to write more, and write often. But at the same time, perhaps later on in the semester you might start incorporating assigned topics. You could even start by just assigning a category or genre, then as your writing assignments progress, narrow down the scope of writing until eventually you reach one specific topic/idea/question that all students will write on. I say this because at the end of the semester some classes will have a written short answer question or an essay. Students wont have a choice on the topic or question. They will have to answer it, or they might fail. So I think it's important to not only let students write what they want to, but also teach them how to respond to questions and topics they don't want to. As a student, I found I actually became a better writer by writing to topics and questions I hated. My sophomore lit professor used to make us draw topics from a hat for one particular writing assignment, and it was almost always topics that I knew absolutely nothing about, or didn't like, didn't agree with, or even didn't understand. She wasn't doing it to be mean, but she was teaching us that sometimes in life we will be faced with situations that we don't like, don't agree with, or don't understand and we have no choice but to figure out a way to respond to it, and respond well. It kind of goes back to the classical rhetoric theory- it's not necessarily what you say, but rather how you say it.
ReplyDeleteI probably didn't make it clear in my blog post (so many ideas all at once!) but my intention would be to give them more rigid assignments near the beginning of the semester while they're still adapting to my expectations for the course.
DeleteAubrey, I love your insight about internal vs. external motivators. Students who are not used to writing are far more likely to feel the pressure of a harsh grading system, so much so that it drives them to feel they have failed at writing before they begin to try. More than that, I would hope one of the goals for 1301 is to allow students to explore their writing style and to come to view the writing process as an artistic process rather than as a means to a 4.0.
ReplyDeleteI also very much agree with your statement that class discussions should be just as big of a factor to a student's grade as any writing. Perhaps your hope to incorporate technology into your classroom could manifest itself in weekly blog posts as reflections of class discussions. This assignment would allow for participation of all your students, as class discussions sometimes get dominated by the more vocal students.
Emma, that's a great point! Blogs could be a component of the Class Discussions grade as a way for less vocal students to participate in the conversation. Mandatory blog responses on peers' blogs would be one way to go; there may also be a way to have an online course discussion that's on one page instead of many pages.
DeleteAubrey--Nice post, and very thought-provoking comments here for you to consider. Please reply to them! I like your ideas about giving students choice, and very good work integrating ideas from the readings. Thinking through what motivates students to learn is part of what we must do as teachers, no matter what the subject. Certainly technology can be used to create an interest, and there's nothing wrong with convenience. Some teachers think they shouldn't use one thing or another simply because it makes things easier. Why not? But, we should slow students down, get them spending more time on task, because they have to spend time in order to learn. What internal motivators can you include?
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